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Chapter 231 - 104 Gaw(Franky): Conflict
🕑 Added 2022-02-11 17:51:09 +0000 UTCEnjoy and please comment. Next chapter is going to be pure, crazy, combat fun.
Comments
Quasi Eludo
Be harsh. Honest opinions help me improve. I'll take your comments to heart and will look into upping the chapter quality.
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Arnon Parenti
This is a very odd cliff to hang on, and half a chapter going about Gunwidow, with nothing from the lady herself leaves a bad taste for me. Sorry to be harsh, but the whole chapter feels like a half baked outline and completely below your usual standard, I would rather you take a couple more days to do it justice than get an idea pitch for something that could be fun to read someday.
