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MGIS 5 - Gathering Strength - Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-03-21 08:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Tefler Fan 007

Big battle won’t be until Book 6. Maybe a small skirmish in this book 5 but the name of this book is Gathering Strength so I guessing this one is a build up to Book 6. Book 6 will be all out war.

cee

"You are transparent. I see many things, I see plans within plans..." :) :) +1 if you know the source. Still wondering where the V'alefa from the food court (bk2?) sits in the Empress' Court

Bob Sneberger

That is one of the reasons that I like your books. I would put them right up there with the Harry Potter books with regards to layers. Love layers.

M. Tress

layers within layers :)

Nozzy

At least he’s left with the smart one..

Bob Sneberger

I feel an Easter egg in chapter 2 has just started to crack. For the life of me I could not figure out why the ambassador would go through all that trouble to get Desmond a secure comms code outside of normal military channels. It was not just to address the UN or whatever back on Earth. Now with knowledge that military comms can be cracked, it is starting to make sense. The question is, who asked the ambassador to set up the secure link. For some reason I think the admiral’s fingerprints are on this as she might suspect a mole.

M. Tress

It is. These are pre editor so there are a few errors xD

Bob Sneberger

“Just wondering when you are your dumb—” Windracer began to snarl back and Desmond cut her off. Is it possible it is suppose to read: “Just wondering when you and your dumb—” Windracer began to snarl back and Desmond cut her off.

malcolm white

"while he jogged along, spike rifle held in the low read" could use a Y. cheers, Malc

Bob Sneberger

Just to stir the pot a little. I think the big battle will come at the end of the book so we have something to look forward to in book 6. I do think something will happen to Windracer, and the only survivor will be Anchor 6, and she will become Desmond’s 6th guard. How is that for a major twist! Laugh.

Nozzy

Hmm can’t decide if I wanna cheer or curse right now…..dilemma

M. Tress

Definitely maybe!

Nozzy

So pre-order next few days yay! Btw. But does that mean cover art revealed sooner?!

Jfax

Even a red herring is a lead to follow in who knows what is happening in the dark

M. Tress

Entirely possible. It might have been left behind as a bit of trash, lost under the ashes. It might have been planted :3

M. Tress

How my process works is I do initial editing passes myself, it goes to the professional editors for their pass, I correct it and then send it through my beta readers for a last check.

Bob Sneberger

So once the book comes back from the editors, do you have to make the changes and send it back to the editors for final editorial review?

Bob Sneberger

I can’t help but feel the broken data tablet is a red herring. How did it get broken? And why was it left there?

M. Tress

Yep. Sometimes people are just annoying.

WandRnMonk

Sometimes, every now and again... a bitchy co-worker is just that. A Job just needs done. Nothing more. Oh there's parts a-moving, but not EVERYTHING needs to be a crisis. That comes a bit later. Gotta build up the tension a bit. I appreciates that. Let the author cook, and we'll all eat hearty. Lolol

Matt Heineman

That's awesome news! I'll try to read it slow to make it last (challenge level: impossible).

M. Tress

It's coming in soon. I'll be posting the pre-order in the next few days. Just got it back from the editors so I can plan for how soon I can get it to you all.

Matt Heineman

Tyftc, excellent as always. You do such a good job of making us hate windracer, I love it. Looking forward to the full book!

Tefler Fan 007

Just one of the possible outcomes I thought of. 😁😜

Tefler Fan 007

I didn’t think Windracer was going to ambush him. I thought Desmond would say something to her that it was a trap and she just blow it off. When Desmond and crew got to the rift entrance, they would walk out using the huge drones as Shields. When they get to the other side there would be a huge battle between everyone from the terrorist group and security. Windracer and some of her guards would be injured from crossfire when they exited because they blew off Desmond’s warning. Desmond and crew would use the drones as barricades, and then heal her and the guards. Then windracer would see the full power of team Arsenal in action.

M. Tress

Windracer would have had to be suicidal to jump him as he exited. And if there was some kind of trap, the commander wouldn't have come in. Des was playing it safe. At the moment, this gang probably thinks it's still unnoticed

Tefler Fan 007

They just walk out without a fight. No ambush or trap. No using the mult ton farming drones as shields and projectiles to throw at the enemy. They just walked out. Now the shit with Windracer at the end was funny.

M. Tress

Didn't think what would happen?

Tefler Fan 007

I had built this chapter up in my head with a bunch of different scenarios while waiting for Friday but I didn’t think this was going to happen. Now I have to wait till Monday. Then Mondays chapter will make me have to wait till Friday for the next and the cycle begins again. 😩😢

Tefler Fan 007

But we have to wait till Monday……nooooooo

Jfax

The after action report to the captain should be a good chapter 😻😘


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