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Steelforged Legacy 2 - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-11-22 09:00:07 +0000 UTC

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M. Tress

ah i get what you are saying now. Sorry been a long day xD

Mike G.

That still sounds backwards? He asked “You think this is safe?” - if she's saying town is riskier, why go there? If the rest of what she says is meant to outweigh the possibly increased risk, maybe it'll be clearer if it's "No safer than staying in the woods, but this way..."

M. Tress

no safer than, I amended it ;)

Mike G.

Glad to see book 2 starting, thanks! > No more safe than staying in the woods. No less safe? No more dangerous?


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