Onlyreon
M. Tress Writes from patreon
M. Tress Writes patreon

Steelforged Legacy 4 - Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2025-10-03 08:00:03 +0000 UTC

Comments

M. Tress

Yeah they are going to get it. And I appreciate the edit suggestions. I'll note them down for now but still waiting on the manuscript to come back from the editors. I figure you guys didn't want to wait even longer to get your teaser chapters.

The Foreign Traveler

Ooh…Bronze Fist is getting their dues! Also, found some potential edits that I thought I’d point out: Edit 1: While he’d been used to thinking of Magnus as something of an angsty teen, by comparison to the twin menaces of Aiden and Blair he was positively mature in his demeanor. (Comma between Blair and he maybe?) Edit 2: “I was told you’ve been harassing passersby for… some reason?” (“Harassing passerby’s” or “Harassing a passerby”? Maybe?) Edit 3: “…and you ran off with them?” (Too much space between words) If adjustment for the other two isn’t needed then that’s fine. Just figured I’d point them out to you at least.

M. Tress

it could go either way. they were running for their lives to escape the Bronze Fist initially, so it was a 'flight for their lives'. but it's something i'm debating shifting

Kyle

Man those little spirit beasts are going to be fun to watch grow! Found a small error " forged during flight for their lives." during a fight for their lives I think is what you meant? Thanks for the chapter


More Creators