MrRyu
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Bara Tales Intro story dialogues.
🕑 Added 2023-11-12 15:43:02 +0000 UTCHey guys, I just finish the intro story, how do you think this story start?
tell me what you think? <3
P.S please ignore the character portrait art, they are temporary images.
Love ya!
Ryu
Comments
Khalenx
You were pretty efficient on the first version of dead dating. Maybe it's just about the way you tell the story ? that doesn't have to be only through a single conversation ?
Mr.Ryu
Thanks for your feedback, yeah... I think too much dialogues might a bit boring. I should make it become 3D scene and add 3D character animation like Hunk city intro. :D
Khalenx
If i may, 4 min, with almost only the genie coming in (and the dialogs are also pretty fast); it's a bit long to keep the player focus on the conversation. Particularly if it's the intro, and we are not yet tied to the characters or the story. Everything else is actually at a high level of quality. You keep getting better, congrats !
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Jason King-Lowe
Iβm looking forward to it!
Georges Martinez
interested in what will happen. For sure there will be issues... xD
James Damant
Love it beyond measure. The intro really makes me want to know more . So canβt wait. β€οΈβ€οΈ
