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1030 - Three Months

🕑 Added 2024-02-16 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Austin lloyd

I just caught up with the story after several weeks on hiatus. I read most of the arc with Marika all at once. I liked it, all the characters were unique and the culture of the plane was a nice contrast. It made sense for the priest guy to stay and atone. I’m glad this arc did not drag on longer. I’m a bit sad Leon did not visit any settlements from the foreign plane, but alas. The fact that the cultist fanatic kept trying to recruit them with the same script felt a bit cliche to me and repetitive. Like how I’d imagine a stereotypical villain to behave. Also, Leon met a new person or party before each settlement, it felt somewhat contrived/plot armorish (like the hand of the writer was dictating a theater performance). Not that such an occurrence is beyond possibility, but some many coincidences feels contrived. I like how Leon’s knowledge of ancient runes and his other knowledge is becoming useful. It’s great seeing his growth. Also, how he kept the group calm and focused was a prime example of his growth as a leader, a person, and a fire s .Thanks for creating such a fun character as Marika! She is awesome! Much thanks.

Etez

Thanks :D


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