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1069 - New Toy

🕑 Added 2024-05-17 15:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Bryn Thomas

Thanks for the chapter!

Paul Whatever

I hope that last sentence isn't the opening statement for yet another thing that goes wrong. Aka some mind-damaging flaw of the cloud glass that interferes with Leo mind and soulspace... Love me some slice of life and Leon getting into his R&D persona, but hopefully this isn't something that delays the departure by another 15-20 chapters.

Austin lloyd

I like the insight we get into tech dev here. Also Leon being playful is a nice change. And we get to see Mari and the court life some. I’m glad you aren’t time jumping immediately to departure. I also like the story plot pacing. More slice of life and dialogue would be enjoyable I think. Like Leon interacting with his ministers, knights, common low level citizens, his retainers kids, sparing with jaguar, fire training with xaphan, or smith/earth training. I know doing so May make the pacing feel slower. But look at the story beware of chicken, the plot continues with loads of slice of life. I imagine others would prefer lesss slice of life though.

Nicholas Hale

Thanks for the chapter

BStew

One of the giants had better be named BT or something similar


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