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The Martial God - Chapter 71

🕑 Added 2024-12-27 16:00:13 +0000 UTC

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CkLance

I was just about to comment this. Unintentionally cooking 👨‍🍳

James Faulkner

I definitely agree with Detective’s take on this! I had minor issues with one of the chapters but overall it’s phenomenal and seeing alternate Iskandaar’s abilities is top notch. I’m excited to see if the original can mimic [Photon Ring] and [Event Horizon]. The names seem to imply that he developed his star affinity to a large degree

The Hand Behind the Veil

Hahaha, that's totally a coincidence actually 😂 Or maybe I was influenced by it subconsciously, I can't be sure. But the Photon Ring's appearance (yes just the look with it floating on his back and not the functionality) was inspired by Moyong Yul Cheon, who's the strongest man in the world, from The Northern Blade (manhwa)

The Hand Behind the Veil

Thank you :) Now Iskandaar just needs to face the incoming tide that follows his victory

The Hand Behind the Veil

That means a lot to me! I've been feeling that Book 2 so far has been a little stagant compared to Book 1 even though so many more stuff have been happening, or maybe its just in my head, but Book 1 definitely was written better since I had the time on my hand to edit and move stuff around here and there because I already had 115k words written before posting anywhere. But it feels great to know Book 2, at least these important chapters, is so well received! I'm glad you've enjoyed them. As for your little question, yes, that Iskandaar seems a lot more focused on his Stellar Affinity side than demon side, or maybe he's come to build a hate for it perhaps. Whatever it may be, he definitely will feel better if our Prime utilizes his Skill to carve a better future

The Hand Behind the Veil

Spoilers—but I don't think we'll ever get to hear from his mouth anyway so it doesn't matter—she's not dead in his timeline, but yes no longer on talking terms. Maybe it really will be prevented, let's see!

Ron1990

Oh, only now noticed. i can see the photon ring and the event horizon in the title image of your patreon site. Nice.

Joseph Phoenix

I’m not gonna write as much as Ron1990 but he’s right this is fire👌 keep up the great work

Ron1990

You're doing really well, describing mage fights like that. The whole fight, from the beginning at ch. 68 to the end at ch. 71, is really overwhelming. Your writíng is so vivd and logical, I can see this damned blockbuster in full glory in my imagination, going from starting his fighting in the periphery, where he belongs levelwise and than dragged into the middle of the action. Resemblances to Dr. Strange in the Multiverse of Madness, the visual description is Dragon Ball Z like and it feels totally fitting. So Iskandaar B failed horrible in his universe. [Photon Ring], [Event Horizon], he fiddled with the power of dying stars and failed? All his friends on his line of existence seem to be dead. Hopefully he finds some satisfaction in the knowledge he help Iskandaar Prime to achieve the ultimate goal, whatever it'll be. Well done, Wordsmith, well done. 👍

James Faulkner

Awesome chapter, Tftc!

Detectivetrap23

"He just smiled, his eyes narrowing in an odd emotion. “It’s nice to see you smile at me again, Amelia,” he said" Ok so either Amelia is also dead in the bad end timeline OR she's alive and is no longer friendly with him after whatever goes wrong. Either way we gotta prevent it!


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