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Martial Arts Vs Magic - Chapter 91

🕑 Added 2025-02-24 16:00:14 +0000 UTC

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CkLance

Translation: Youngster, you returned riding the back of the native Demigods' leader and a direct descendant of the First Apocalypse working as your 'maid'. How does my daughter factor into all of this? 🤔😉

James Faulkner

😂

The Hand Behind the Veil

It's definitely easier when your rival in love isn't from the family who killed 90% of your family 😂 applies to both of them

The Hand Behind the Veil

Thank you for the compliments! If you're an old reader you'd know this story wasn't supposed to be harem, so the focus has always been on developing the characters rather than developing the romance. And I plan to keep it that way, developing the characters for their sake. The reason Ha Yun kind of misses out on that is because all the girls had their arcs, but she didn't. One reason is because honestly I'm not sure if she'll end up as a harem member. Not all the girls have to be. She might, or she might not. It depends on where the flow of the writing, flow of the other characters, carry the story. We'll see!

Detectivetrap23

“Well originally my intention was to ditch her so I could secretly gain power but she found out anyway so now I have to be nice enough that she keeps my secrets” As expected, Ha-Yun and her father don’t like her fiancé or the situation that led to her having one. Will they try to use iskandaar to get out of it? I liked the talk with solara and Lilian. They get along better than Lilian and nebula so it’s not surprising it went more peaceful. Not to mention solara already laid the groundwork for them accepting multiple wives haha

Kedrick Hebert

Tftc. Tbh I didn’t see the convo with the Monarch coming and it kinda worries me that Ha-Yun and Iskandaar will end up betrothed by the end of this arc. Not that I’m inherently against it I suppose, it just seems like it would be a bit abrupt imo. I typically am not a fan of harem stories since I find that oftentimes the women end up fairly shallow as characters, but I think you’ve done a wonderful job thus far with the depth you’ve shown with Lilian Nebula and Solara and their interactions with Iskandaar. How they’ve come together been really well done, the relationship drama has felt impactful and meaningful, and the four of them have been remarkably mature (arguably more than their ages would imply) in their interactions and reactions. All that said, I think a relationship with Ha-Yun would feel a bit abrupt and forced at this point, given they’ve barely known each other a couple weeks and have only had a handful of on-screen conversations. All that being said, I’m sure I’ll continue to enjoy this story and I hope it continues for a long time. Thanks again Hope the Amazon issue got resolved without any major issues or repercussions


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