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5.54 (Rewrite)
🕑 Added 2019-01-22 13:26:29 +0000 UTCNormally I'd break this one up, but...this is the chapter I meant to write. And lemme tell you--my hands hurt. Read it and weep. Or stop for a break because it's long. (27,000 Words)
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http://wanderinginn.com/2019/01/22/5-54-2
Comments
Joseph R Gratton
There's an entire city in the underground dungeon.... the goblins want a home.... maybe the red-fang goblins and cave goblins can convince the goblin lord to take that city for them? Maybe Toren takes out the remaining dungeon boss thing, and takes out the necromancer when the necromancer tries to get to his apprentice.
Very good chapter!! I'm really glad you rewrote it.
Benjamin Farcot
Well, I ended up making a patreon because I couldn't wait until saturday, and I feared I'd be tempted to read the non canon version first. I was well worth the money. Thank you for the ride, in the last 6 monthes I've followed Erin and the world around her, I haven't been disapointed, it's been amazing. Thank you.
Kevin Choi
Chapter is a lot better! Well done.
Arctruth
Oh my god. Only up to the crying party so far and my socks are already blown off. All those plot points are cleaned up, dressed up, and tied up with a bow for us to look at and go "oh wait is it this one or this or is that a red herring or whose plan is right??" Edit: 7/10 my ass, easily 9/10. Tons of setup and a healthy (and delicious) dose of payoff while you were at it. Beautiful chapter.
Ashrothe
Hmmm time for Ryoka to make an amazing well timed return with a certain wealthy lizard?
Andrew
What an amazing chapter, thank you!!
ok now have finished the chapter. that was unexpected, interesting, and very eventful. i cant wait to see what the non patreons think about this
i havent even read it yet but that is an incredible amount of words. maybe pirate should consider putting hands in ice bucket?
pirateaba
betterChapter is the password. Copy and paste!
Help in a newb . Received link but no password? What am I missing?
Randomdigits
I'd be forced to upgrade my Patreon contribution.
Ground Control
50k words chapter by 2020?
derp
triple long dang
B'eliar An'Zoth Lord of Daze
Dead Gods that is a lot of words
