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🕑 Added 2022-01-16 01:33:08 +0000 UTCI'm off break! Did you read the book yet? Here's a novella. (29,200 Words)
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Comments
SaintMaceToTheFace
I love the king and his vassal’s chapters the most
Gandeida
Loved the book, and I definitely want to read more about this parallel journey. I also enjoyed listening to the songs - some of them new to me - and watching the slo-mo walk video :) In chapter 1.06 P, I believe that this is supposed to be Ser Dalimont rather than Ser Dalius: He was bowing to Ser Dalius. The [Knight] bowed stiffly, and Seraphel waved a hand, although her face was pale.
Froyo Baggins
Had the same thought, butt didn't want to derail conversation. Kasperov's games with deep blue were also set up in such a way as to give the computer an advantage and not devalue IBM's investment though I'm sure we could do better than deep blue now.
Jenny Farmer
Loved the book!
I want to note that Trey is wrong. Chess has not been solved. It is, in theory, a solvable game, but current computing power is VERY far from enough to solve it.
chump1999
Liked the book. Liked the chapter. But as always, I always prefer anything to do with Erin first and foremost followed by anyone who has ties to Liscor with my favourites being the Antinium and the Horns (and Fehotep).
DThornz
I'd say go ahead as Pirate said: "To use a Toren metaphor, imagine this is an undead skeleton. If there are new parts, think of it like Toren replacing his hand or polishing bones; the body remains. The only big removal will be song lyrics, which I have no copyright for...yet. The published version will have them in, but I have edited them all out in this version. You can still see the song name in such places, but the experience in changed and that is the one huge difference I can point to." Actual core story content should be the same. Only removal are song lyrics. Any further revisions would just be polishing the wording here and there and perhaps improving grammar/syntax as such.
Froyo Baggins
Real talk guys, should I read gravesong, or should I wait for the final form? I definitely wont reread soon so it's about how much it will alter the experience.
Rusty Shackleford
Loved Gravesong, I was glued to my tablet every night
Chargcake
Ooooo! Now I can't wait for the next chapter of wistram!
Ignat Remizov
The book was incredible! Can't wait to find out how Cara meets the other earthers, and who she contacts to make the song crystals. And what her Class evolves into when she becomes basically world-famous.
Ignat Remizov
how can you even ask that, we ducks are full enough already! Absolutely bursting!
Matt
That was a very fun chapter. Felt like a spy novel. Poor pigeon.
Atlas Dwarf
The book was great and so was the chapter. The book is definitely a much smoother entry point into the Wandering Inn than the current Volumes 1 and 2 are.
JasonD
Gravesong was everything I hoped for and more -- then again, that's sorta the Wandering Inn experience in a nutshell, isn't it? Looking forward to the rest of Cara's story :)
NaO
Halfway through gravesong and i love what i see so far.
Steven "Bull" Ratkovich
I binged Gravesong less than 30 minutes after you dropped it. Really good! When is book 2? ;)
Craig
The book was mostly great, my biggest hesitation is that you said you were going to do another editing pass (which we all know really means you are going to write another 50k words 😂) Other than the fear of missing out, it was awesome!
Book was fantastic
DThornz
Pirate: Read the book yet? Me: Ah about that been going at it but it is a lo... Pirate: Here's a novella Me: Dammit Pirate
Loved the book! Book 2 next month then?
Hope D
Squeeeeeee thank you!!!
billy herrera
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