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6.46 E
🕑 Added 2019-09-21 16:42:30 +0000 UTCAnd here we are. (15,200 Words)
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http://wanderinginn.com/2019/09/21/6-46-e
Comments
Holy crap that ending. Phenominal.
John Koor
Umm. Spoilers?
KDP
Good arc!
TinkTank
Spoiler alert: I loved the twist but writing at the end felt forced. Like Ryoka who seemed to have struggled to even move the wind this arc now suddenly changed the path of a fire twister? Wish we could have spent more time on her overcoming her struggle with the wind.
Hursha
Hmmm. I am not a fan of the ending of this chapter.
Screwball
I was always on the fence for this Arc but that ending just sold the entire Arc for me. Good Work keep it up!
Rukshan
Damn... that was well done. Have no doubt
loved it. Didn't see the twists coming.
Seadrake
The best and the worst part of your writting is just how damn good you are at characterisation, and how little plot armor you put in.
