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7.51

🕑 Added 2020-10-11 05:16:47 +0000 UTC

Comments

Lissa

I agree. The last... Maybe 5 chapters seem all rushed. The one with the pirates attacking the king of destruction very notably so. Also most of them seem like a tale of 'and then this happened, and meanwhile over here...' but I really enjoy character buildup even if it takes longer. I wish pirate wasn't in such a rush lately. There is also repetitiveness, but that was always an issue I guess. Also grammar and spelling seem to have suffered. As much as I look forward to every chapter I would actually enjoy a well written one once a week more than the rushed ones.

Donato Hunter

Kinda felt like rushing a Liam redemption arc by shoving him and Krshia into a relationship and giving him a bunch of noble causes without really having him deal with the crap he has pulled or the fact that his position of power is due to the former council being cheats. Him being suddenly competent and caring feels more like a retcon than the progressive writing the story normally has. Kinda the opposite of the Montressa stuff.

Joel Nikula

Or earlier and earlier in the morning

Kevin Choi

:(. Seems like it gets later and later at night before chapters come out.

Kevin Choi

Would have rather had a nice build up to this one. Like them getting drinks together a couple times or something.... Feel like with all the new areas we are getting, the main cast seems to be losing detail.

taukid

I actually have been looking the Lism-Krshia dynamic lately but I never would've guessed it was intimate. Really enjoyed them this chapter.

Ruyxi Sylpheyes

like it basically turns miss house of El into her younger self that only regains her memories and levels like the last day before the potion wears off and she needs to take another one. almost like a second personality

Ruyxi Sylpheyes

hmm, side effects of youth include loss of memories and levels as potion of youth potion reverses time for drinker maybe?

Parker Groseclose

I feel like a kid that was taken into the ice cream shop only to be carried over to the candy store. The Erin tease is for real and the drama increases. Cannot wait for Tuesday.