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The Roots (Pt. 2)
🕑 Added 2024-08-11 23:30:54 +0000 UTCThe end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is... (16,400 Words.)
https://wanderinginn.com/2024/08/11/the-roots-pt-2/
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Comments
Sarah
Where do you enter the slam password? I just get links to “become a patreon” when I click the word and end up back here. Obviously I’m behind because no place to enter a password to 2 #1
Splutty
I too, missed Part 2-2 initially.
Pherosis
Password is: slam All lower case, had the same issue and experimented till it worked.
Rico Anthony
What was the password? I don't see any author's notes. Just comments.
Stephanie Creasy
Thank you!
Ennesby
password is in the author's notes at the bottom of The Roots Pt. 2, it's different than the chapter password
Jacob Dayley
I am as well
Stephanie Creasy
I just realized the link on "slam" and the password doesn't appear to work. Anyone else having this issue?
Grey
I strongly suspect that the [Palace of Fate] visions only begin at the start of this chapter - things like Mrsha falling on her head line up with things said in Roots pt 1 by the Fae, and I don't notice any weird inconsistencies in the previous chapters, like Mrsha knowing the Grand Design's name instead of calling it the system.
Red
All the data the Grand Design appended was just vanishing into a void. It tried to fix it three times—and Ryoka’s entry wouldn’t reappear or come back. It couldn’t even make a new file on Ryoka. In the end, the Grand Design created a ‘Ryoko Griffin’ entry and logged everything new in there. If it had to reinstate her level…
Red
9.61 G lower half
Tartlet
Pretty sure that’s in an alternate fate?
Scott Soper
Can anyone point me to the part of the story where the Grand Design labels Ryoka "Ryoko"? I know it can't see her clearly but I thought it might know her name from other people's conversations.
Charles T Martin
Unexpected and fascinating.
Jordan
When Mersha got her levels revoked I got legit mad…talk about proverbial blue balls!
Robert Johansson
Here is hoping that Mrsha get her Levels back just to save her mom and Rags.
Rukshan
Only she can save Lyonette now
Rukshan
Mrsha, the Great and Terrible
Larc
Well this is downright fantastic.
toni990
First of all I want to say I've Loved all of this story you have a very unique writing style and I cannot wait and I cannot emphasize this enough for the next chapter and I can tell you love your clip hangers when I got to the end I was like bloody pirates I say that with all love by the way can't wait to read the next one
Melry
I had so many feelings throughout this chapter. Very discombobulated but eagerly awaiting the continuation.
Fitty Sebum
Ok. Is this a spoiler? Click the frickin hyperlink!!! Click slam. I almost didn't see that.
Valmorian
wow great chapter! I can't say I saw it coming but that's no surprise maybe in a reread. I absolutely loved it
Edda
Who needs drugs when there are chapters like these?
Miles Kidder
It was great, that one liner was incredibly terrifying. Didn't expect it, even though there were so many hints
Lawrence
One chapter is not enough is not one chapter is not enough....
Lawrence
Reminds me of the Unrealized Reality episode in Farscape. Nice Stanley Parable reference, too. Looking forward to more!
Craig
She also refers to Ryoko being “the most correct about faeries”. “Ryoko” is the name that the grand design uses for Ryoka
Mrs. Murdy
Welp that was a bit of a mindscrew
Jordan
Thank you
Anonymous
Trama for everyone!
Red
Mrsha casually mentions the “grand design”
Rados
Stanley parable reference hell yessss. This chapter was awesomeeee! So excited for the next chapter
Brian Chen
What an incredible chapter! The way you make transitions to the next part and the twist at the very end. You are truly an amazing writer!
Red
Standing ovation. Absolutely brilliant.
Jordan
Threw me for a freaking loop. Perfect way to make the readers figure it out themselves with a cliffhanger on the third one
Richard Fields
iHeartItSoHard
Dan Lewis
"Ryoko" Uh oh.
Richard Fields
Clever sonofagun
thomas j walters
you absolute goober you got me
Scott Soper
All work and no play makes Homer something something...
SirThomasXVI
Gracias
James Getgood
But is this the song that never ends?
JumpingPotatoSack
Someone’s been playing the critically acclaimed Stanley Parable 2 Ultra Deluxe edition. Should’ve won game of the year.
