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10.31 (Pt. 1 and Pt. 2)

🕑 Added 2025-01-11 21:55:57 +0000 UTC

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Dorian Moody

I think I’ve spent too much time thinking of this all the bits are there with making the city fly, I was thinking you you could make one with magic like a wooden narrow boat (like a canoe) with wings with lightweight enchantment or something like that . flaps to control direction, and a spell of direction with just the destination its own tail and I think that would fly and so mad only goblins would think of it

Samma

Interesting twist at the end!! Loved the chapter.

longhairdfreak

Amazing. Simply amazing

SureRuseUser

Suggestion for the Webcomic: Add the ability to use the Left and Right Arrow Keys to turn the pages on the non-scroll viewer.

Evan Cermak

Excellent work. I love this worl you have created. I am honestly very grateful for it.

Zack Mikeska

Really strong work!

Dandy

Can't wait until the appearance of Archmage Albert!

Christine

Now I ifinished chapter two. it was Amazing! Great fight scenes! having the Kraken Eaters showing up at the end was a nice bonus too. I think all these chapters from this new volume have been some of the best work you’ve done so far. Things are getting really interesting with the system edition two and now that rags got a rocket skill I’m wondering if fightipilota is about to get her dreams class? Anyway can’t wait till the next chapter but I also don’t mind waiting :p

PearsMan

Good chapter! Welcome back! Glad to know u had fun. Shreikas section during the fight was beautifully written, best part of this chapter. The brass shedding his entire what? Outer layer? Kind of feels like it came out of nowhere and wasn’t convincing enough as a reader. Worse, He was constantly being compared to a cat aswell so for him to do something of a different animal kind of makes it even more jarring. This enemy being compared to the dead god Winter solidtice event where even the narrator saying THIS is worse….yeah no it dosent feel like that all. I don’t reccomend having bigger and badder bosses that dosent always end well. I think tieing it back to humanity would have just as equal or greater effect than an evil monster, since it’s more relatable (exp arcane season 1 silco and his humanity compared to season 2) Why are the literal incarnates of death human. U would think they would be literally anything else, something abstract? Maybe the fundamental building blocks of life and death? Also There being a bigger bad that the goddess of death kind of irks me in the sense we’re just pulling a bigger fish out of nowhere it kind of takes away from everything else. So the difference is she’s death based on ideas and their just death itself. Idk this whole multiverse hasnt been super engaging for me oh well. Getting to know magnolias hair is blond 10 million words in after alot of fanart has her with brown. Too late to change it in my mind. I always saw her with brown hair too let the audience keep their image. Same with the brass dragon and his uh hair I feel like that’s only recently been rmphaized but I don’t remember that all from the past and hard to start changing images 10 million words in. I’m not saying not to put it in but creative freedom of readers n all.