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Mini-Chapters + July Story Poll!

🕑 Added 2025-07-05 23:54:34 +0000 UTC

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Carvel Williams

I kind of want to see the Slayers Adventure and Zevara Detective Tales

Nik

I'm still finishing up but I have a few thoughts. First, I loved almost all of the mini chapters. Those Zevara chapters were amazing. Secondly, Caroline, I don't think I have ever hated a character in TWI more than her. I'm just a few hundred words at that. Third, the spirited children is probably the weakest and my least favorite plot thread, I cringe every time it gets brought up. But I can manage to get through it but that new earther coming in and almost immediately getting classes and skills and reaching lvl 12 and 16 was just bad. I hope you don't keep that in the final release. Actually I hope that when the books catch up to volume 8, the spirited generation stuff just gets dropped. Other than that, I genuinely loved the mini chapters

Adam

I dearly want either Lilliam's Vacation or Healing in Ailendaimus, but it looks like those are unlikely to win the poll. Lilliam's Vacation I feel would add more depth to Manus, which is something I've been looking for because they often seem like outright villains in the story. Their whole paranoid military-industrial thing feels very real, but obviously has got to have some interesting depth to it beyond that. Also, I want to know what [Sheathe Tender] does. Healing sounds interesting because I want the sublot of slavery and djinn to advance, and also we haven't spent a lot of time with Dame Eclizza and I want to see more of her. Plus every interaction with that poor lizardgirl was so cute that I deeply want more of it. To a lesser extent I also want to see Calidus the Guildmaster, mainly because I think that would be a hilarious chapter. That guy always makes me laugh.

Lord M

Hope you feel better.


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