UPDATE: Interlude - The Spitoon
🕑 Added 2023-03-29 05:38:37 +0000 UTCI FORGOT TO WRITE A SCENE. I have written and added it. Few hundred words.
Refresh the chapter or scroll to the end if you've read it already. This is all. It's small...but important.
Comments
Fitty Sebum
OH! I just saw the discord announcement about the fly infestation. I am...okay, it's funny. My question now is: ARE YOU THE DEVIL????
Fitty Sebum
o my fucking god that beeeeeeeee - uh. let me guess. it's name is asdfkljfsdtheifubwe3-pi.
Fitty Sebum
Also - that bee. keeps. flying. across. the screen. I want it dead.
Fitty Sebum
Okay. Does anyone else occasionally read these chapters out loud and, uh, laugh hysterically when they attempt to pronounce these frickin names Pirate comes up with? I mean, it's - Pirate HAS to be pranking the audible reader. This? Makes me happy to think about.
The link to the chapter is in pirateaba’s previous post.
Shawn Eichner
I'll take a cheeseburger with fries and a large coke and uhhhhh...
is this the newest chapter not out to free readers yet? I can't find it anywhere.
Eddy G
My goodness. Heretic AI uprising? This story really does have everything.
Captdeth
5hr
Christopher Judd
First retcon I've seen from Pirate ever! Take your break Pirate. Make it a month. Kick that cold and come back strong. Drink ginger tea(boiled ginger root) and Emergen-C. You'll be over it in no time.
Christopher Ozouf
The addition really made a difference to the overall story. Without it this was still a great chapter but disconnected from the overall plot except as a "hey remember this guy?!" moment. The last bit is crucial for setting up possible future plot points.
i wanna be friends w the grand design