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9.41 (Pt. 2)

🕑 Added 2023-04-12 04:04:58 +0000 UTC

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Cosmo Kramer

Levels chapter tonight, then a break, then Pt 3?

Peter Bruckback

I really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

The amount of tears, wow, what a chapter!!!! That ending had me shivering with all the feels and I feel like Ive had an emotional cleanse. Its so exciting to be at flame festival right now and know three of us are up to or close to up to date, and three other people can talk because they are all waiting for the next audible. Poor saps have nod idea whats waiting for them at the end of volume 7… each moments the biggest… Dang overzealous bloodfeast raiders and weather spells… sad evil half elf… always thought the gentleman callers should be one source of knights, dreaming of the gentelman callers return from oteslia (sorry for probable mispellings)

Parker Groseclose

I forgot it wasn't winter anymore while reading this

JazBird

Tears were shed. In the best way. Good chapter for heros.

why oh why.. do u want me to cry ..

Laura Nethers

LOVED this chapter! I'm stilll wiping my tears away. Typos: 1) Perhaps freezing side-by-side in a tent! Huddling together, naken, for warmth. 2) And I understand there are physical defenses as well as a number of fairly high-level Goblims.

Nigel Franklin

I like the idea of a font but a lot of fancy looking fonts have to be giant sized in order to be read easily. I don't know if there's a single font that manages to both look fancy and be highly readable, but that's what would be ideal.

Louis Nel

Mrsha's font is not very legible and also distracts from others dialogue. Maybe less flourishy and not as bold. I don't think she needs her own font to be honest. I read on my phone.

MrAlwaysRight

Enjoyed the concept of adding a font to Mrsha's letters, but it could perhaps be a little more legible

SolsticeGoblin

That was the hardest I’ve laughed in a while, and also I cried a bit. Wonderful chapter ❤️

Victor DoUrden

Last chapter feels to much of a cliffhang partway in a climax or starting climax. Disappointed it didn't pick off from there and then ease into the seriousness

Anti-Spiral

I'm not crying, you're crying!

CrelerSquid

I have cried at each of these chapters, and you're telling me we're halfway through the arc? You are a heart render Pirate, thank you so much. Ninja edit: Mrsha font is a little hard to read, but I think is delicious character flavor. I think that perhaps a font that doesn't flow from one letter *into* the next might be beneficial.

Benedict Beale

Love the Mrsha font it's nice and legible too. Please don't cut it down. Also I don't know if I love or hate this chapter, it definitely released the onion ninjas

Craig

Also, I like that Mirsha gets her own font but I really wish she had a font that I could read.

Aloysius

Eh, when it's your writing style it comes natural and quick to you so that's not really a point. But i do agree that it is hard to read, that by itself should say enough. Emersion/reality shouldn't come at the cost of reader quality

SureRuseUser

Awesome and super emotional Santa story. The font to me is a bit too over-the-top and is both hard to read and does not seem like a style someone who needs to write a lot would choose to develop even with a mother focussing on proper penmrshaship.

Amazing chapter