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🕑 Added 2023-08-08 12:35:19 +0000 UTC

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Reddsaint

Scenes we are looking forward to aren't given enough description, which means they aren't hitting hard enough. Harry also seems like a big fish in a very small pond at this point, especially with the removal of Dumbledore. You've made it painfully clear that he doesn't have any viable opposition in the Wizard world right now. Can't really explain much further than that, but the most recent 40 or so chapters feel like going through the motions. I am looking forward to what you do with Marvel, maybe it's time to start injecting more mutants or Marvel demons in the opposition or something.

He doesn't have a reason to explore the wider world, yet as the resurrection of his mother and the death of Voldemort takes priority right now

Kr0n

From my part harry went way dark and he barely explored marvel world


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