BrOkEn eNgLiSh
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Very importent information (and poll)
🕑 Added 2021-09-09 09:03:08 +0000 UTC(Sorry for the bad grammar XD
My frined usual help me checking is too busy now
I'll post a checked script on the comment after she's able to help me again)
After all those suffer,
even I'm still feels frustrated,
I can only move on due to no other choice XD
But still, I had made some decisions
1. "The fate of choices" update'll only up to 1.1
and the update content'll be less then the original plan
Although I really like Lisa,
and this game has a lot of potential.
But I have so many sad memories from it,
and I really think I'm not able to continue to update it.
Perhaps...it'll be change in the future...but not now.
2. I'll change my supporter's benefit system soon,
because I think I make it quite messy,
so I'll make me better to balance everything.
And from now on, there'll be no post for the version after 0.8 version.
I'll only give away my game to the person who I trust after the game being selling,
no matter how much you had support me
My dream is to let people to play high quality erotic game,
but that doesn't mean I don't need to pay my rent and money for eat.
3. the importnet point of this post
Another reason I want to quit update the fate of choices,
is because "Mins" will officially become my partner.
We'll making game together from the next project,
which can hugly lower my workload and pressure,
and increase the project's standard.
But, after lots of discussions and design,
we choose two our favorite script, but we can't decide which one we should use.
So I'm starting this pull to ask which one you prefer~
*High chance we'll make both, but this pull is to decide which one is our next project.
*The pull result just for us to reference, our decisions might affect by other things
Scripts introduce:
FIRST SCRIPT:
A new lovely couple, which suddenly needs a huge amount of money,
the male MC is a hard working office worker,
the female MC is a housewife who have a part time job.
And after the female MC learn how to sex to gain money from her friend,
she slowly walk into this world to sell her body.
1. This game is focus on the system when the MC selling her body,
which have two stages, "seduce" and "sex combat"
Seduce, is like RPG, using skill to drop target's resist(HP) to 0
so he can accept the trading
Sex combat, is to let the target which had agree the trading to satisfy,
which will have full sex scenes during the combat
(there'll be skip system, player can skip both stage, but earn less money and EXP)
There'll male characters(whcih like a small monster in rpg game)
using several types of models
and male characters have their own skin and story(which like a boos in rpg game)
2. Multiple story lines,
which will have the love route with the male MC,
and different kinds of NTR route for other male characters(like the male MC's boss or rogue).
Also, the female MC's lewdness will also affect to the story.
3. Dress up system, which player can dress the female MC as they want,
the outfit will be like equipment as RPG
and there'll have different kinds of accessories
(update will focus on the clothes and accessories first,
the change for the body such as hair or breasts will come out at the late update version)
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SECOND SCRIPT:
In the future, the declining of birthrate become a threat to humanity.
To provent that, countries encourage companies for any new erotic produce,
therefore, a VR card game has been invented.
In this game, only adult female (might inculde femboy?) can play this card game
which the all battle character in this game are female.
A whole strange future world which full with erotic and sex~
1. a card game which kind of like Yu-Gi-Oh, but will have different detail systems,
and the monster cards are all represent as male,
from a handsome guy to middle ago ugly man,
from dog to tentacles.
When the player(or emeny) use her monster card to direct attack other player,
they'll be breed by that monster card until her next round.
When one of the character's resist point(which as her HP) srop to 0,
that person will be impregnate and lose the game,
and the winner can get one of the card from the loser and some money.
(Don't worry, the semen from the machine are all from the donation of a normal human XD )
2. Different kinds of item card,
such as "hypnosis", which can increase emeny's card, and make the emeny become lustful,
or "lactation " and other item card to cause some change to emeny's body.
Especially after the combat when the npc lose the game,
her stand picture will also has pregnancy when player talk to her again.
(after a while, she'll giving birth, and player can challenge her again)
4. Side quest,
when you searching new cards and materials,
enjoy some lewd scenes happening to the characters.
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Chinese
在經歷過之前發生的慘劇後
雖然還是挺失落的,但是也決定繼續向前
畢竟我也沒什麼其他選擇了www
但是我做了一些決定
1.命運的抉擇將只會更新至1.1
而且更新的內容可能比較少
儘管我很喜歡Lisa這個角色
而且這個作品很有潛力
但是這個遊戲的製作過程中給了我太多的痛苦回憶
我發現我已經沒辦法繼續完善這個作品了
也或許,等哪天我有空也心血來潮的時候,會再次更新吧
2.我會在近期調整我的支持者福利
因為我發現我沒有很好的落實,而且似乎有些雜亂
我會將其調整得更加完善
並且之後的遊戲,製作到0.8版本後就不會再進行公布了
就算你給的錢再多,直到我正式發售前都不會把遊戲交給任何人
我的夢想是讓大家玩到更多高品質的好的Hgame
但不代表我應該讓所有人都能免費遊玩,我也是需要吃飯付房租的
3.這個是本次文章的重點
另一個我不打算再更大量的後續更新命運抉擇的理由
是因為各位有聽我說過的"小閔"將會正式成為我的搭檔
兩人一同開發下部作品,將會讓我大幅減輕工作量與壓力
從而提高之後作品帶來的水準
不過,我們兩個在經過大量的討論與人物設計後
目前挑選出兩個我們都很喜歡的劇本後,無法決定要先採用哪個
所以想先發起投票來詢問大家的意見~
*我們應該兩款遊戲都會製作,但是這是決定先製作哪個劇本為下部作品
*投票結果為我們的一大參考,但是可能會在現實面的影響下做出與投票結果不同的選擇
遊戲劇本介紹:
第一個劇本~!
一對初步社會的新婚夫妻,由於需要一筆龐大的生活基金
男主角是努力的上班族,而女主角則是半兼職的家庭主婦
女主在一次偶然下從周遭聽聞能夠快速賺錢的方法,便開始了一步步陷入出賣身體的金錢泥沼裡
1.遊戲主打賣春系統,分為攬客與H對戰
前者需要像RPG般使用技能誘惑對手攬客成功
後者則是在床上令對方滿意以賺取金錢(全程皆有H場景演出)
(會有戰鬥跳過系統,但是完整地進行戰鬥則能給顧客更多滿意度與金錢)
除了通用的男性(類似小怪)外,還有各種擁有專屬劇情與路線的男性(Boss)
2.多條路線,大致分成與男主的純愛線(透過協助男主來讓他飛黃騰達)
及各大男性的寢取線(像是不良少年,男主上司等等)
另外女主的身體被玷汙的次數會影響結局的情況。
3.紙娃娃系統,可令玩家進行換裝,並且像RPG一樣有各種裝備的能力
同時預計除了服裝外,還會有飾品
(一開始更新主要以服裝和飾品為主,外觀變化會在較後期的更新登場)
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第二個劇本~!
在未來因為極端性少子化
世界開始大肆鼓勵各種性產業的發展
某間遊戲公司開發出了一款實境卡牌遊戲
遊戲只能由成年女性(可能包含偽娘)進行遊玩
讓玩家沉浸在這個大家都在想著sex的奇異未來世界中
1.像遊戲王那樣的卡牌戰鬥模式(大致而已,詳細系統不同),但是怪物全部都是雄性,從大叔到狗狗甚至觸手
一旦直接對手(或女主被直擊),就會被怪物交配
先讓對方受孕就贏了(忍耐值類似生命值,歸零即受精,不過精液來源是機器預先設定好由人類捐獻的精液)
贏的人可以得到對方一張卡,並且獲得比賽獎金
2.遊戲中也有各種道具卡來干擾對手
像是催眠卡,讓對方手牌減少,但是現實也會變得容易發情等等
或是催乳等等短暫改造
特別是在戰鬥結束後,往後與戰敗方對話,對方都會是懷孕的姿態
(等到過了一定時間對方生產過後,可以再次交戰)
4.額外的支線劇情
在收集卡片與素材的同時
欣賞著各種荒唐淫亂的H事件發生
Comments
第一個主要是劇情經典，受眾比較穩定；第二個的話，得想辦法多做點遊戲性了
jackal
比较懒，隔三差五瞄一眼XD
梦涵
还有就是其实卖春要素主要玩命运的选择我以为就有这一要素的，结果没有...........
梦涵
第一个虽然老套烂大街但侧面也反应这种类型挺好用的，第二个战斗h一直不是我的菜，而且这样的话感觉在战斗中很容易触发h的话对于纯爱线和牛头人线都不是太好的因素，因为纯爱线肯定不乐意触发h就会想办法无伤，而显得战斗无聊，牛头人线之所以牛头人受众主要还是有各种条件因素铺垫就牛了，而不是一上来随随便便战斗就牛了毫无剧情感情铺垫可言，而显得牛不牛其实都一样不影响女主人设等。当然也可以像隔壁监狱一样开局设定一个男女主互相喜欢的人设，后来的战斗h等循序渐进，这样也多多少少好些，虽然纯爱ntr要素还是不太重要，主要看是想做纯爱牛头人为主要的游戏还是只是做h游戏加一些纯爱牛头人要素，两者比重。额虽然玩的话想玩第一种，但是第二种也挺创新的，如果能把上面的问题处理得当，那就选择第二种吧
BrOkEn eNgLiSh
預計要9月底or10月了 不過你沒有要投票嗎www?
BrOkEn eNgLiSh
預計會有,像是改變胸部大小染髮等等的 但是會是較後期有餘力才會有
jackal
等你发售
BrOkEn eNgLiSh
好的~第一劇本1票
BrOkEn eNgLiSh
我懂這種感覺www我甚至就是打算設計成這種遊戲 因為很多遊戲的戰鬥和H內容格格不入 我就是想設計出能夠讓玩家玩得過癮又能享受H內容的遊戲~ (而不是為了刷出H內容的痛苦流水帳)
BrOkEn eNgLiSh
如果是追求痛點和劇情,你可以放心 如果說我是純愛腦,那小閔就是NTR腦www (他很常吐槽我純愛寫太好,NTR寫太爛www) 所以我姑且把你當成投第一劇本1票吧
BrOkEn eNgLiSh
其實我和小閔也偏好第二個www 小閔甚至還說第二個他肯定會廢寢忘食的創作 但是我們其實已經把第一個劇本的人設設計的差不多了 而且第二個的成本肯定遠高於第一 所以我們才會拿出來問www
明
第一個吧 感覺如果更細膩描述身體變化會很好(有圖更讚)
就我一个想看看第二个剧本吗 。。。
我個人非常喜歡第一個劇本，婚後NTR算是我的痛點。但是感覺第二個劇本更加吸引人，因為上班族婚後NTR這個題材的遊戲太多了。
喜欢1，但rpg元素过重的话不知道其他人怎么样，我很容易就会变成认真去玩游戏而忘记是来玩h游的……要是操控角色是男主感觉也会很有趣
喜欢第一个剧本
