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Peek at chapter 15
So, we'll have another chapter. As probably the whole story will end with chapter 21 (+epilogues), we have 33% of the content ahead. This chapter more or less concentrates on Olivier and Martha and their plans for the close future. :)
The Parity 0.54
A new release - Patreon has some problems with the attachments, but I hope there will be a new chapter for you...Chapters 0-14:External link here
Robert's fate 2
Well, Robert's fate, if the ritual was performed, would be quite different. As another preview of the upcoming chapter, let's see if Carl is the best person who should have magical powers.***You noticed Robert. He was sitting on the bench in front of the school's entrance. He was goggling at the girls with a blank gaze and a creepy smile on his face. The day was warm, and it was May, so many girls wore quite revealing clothes. Robert looked at those tops and skirts with apparent inte...
500 likes at TFGames :)
"The Parity" has reached 500 likes at TFGames. It was my personal goal to achieve. :) I'm glad that there are at least 500 people who recommend my first attempt to make a Twine game. :)I'm working on Chapter 14, and I'm working quite quickly, so I hope that the new release will be sooner than later. :) You deserve it. :)
Come not between a Nazgul and his (her?) prey
Here's another scene from the upcoming chapter. If Robert didn't witness the ritual it has some details concerning the Neighbours instead. But I decided to show you the variant with the most extended Bimbo-Pauline's part.***When Carl was busy teasing Robert, you had your chance.You jumped with a scream. You grabbed Carl with all your force. He didn't suspect an attack, so he fell to the ground.But he was much taller and stronger than you. When your hands were looking for his thro...
Robert's fate
Chapter 14 opens one of two ways to change Pauline back to Paul. But of course, she can decide that she doesn't want to exchange places with Robert. Here are three passages as a preview of the upcoming chapter:***You noticed Robert. He was sitting on the bench in front of the school's entrance. He was goggling at the girls with a blank gaze and a creepy smile on his face. The day was warm, and it was May, so many girls wore quite revealing clothes. Robert looked at those tops and skirts ...
Carl's second thoughts
A short scene from the upcoming chapter. It will take place in a hotel room where Carl will take Pauline to, let's say, celebrate his victory over Parity. I've had this scene in my mind for a long time, and I think it's a good sum of this character.***Carl remained silent for a moment. He spat some of your hair, he almost swallowed before. It was obvious that he didn't know what to do next. After this show of the dominance, triumphant grins, and rough sex he looked lost."Do y...
The Parity 0.53a
Patch to 0.53 version. Some minor bugs and typos fixed. It's easier (from 9 to 7) to get Martha's help in chapter 13 (it seems that the threshold is too high).
How does chapter 13 end in your walkthrough?
So, after the chapter 13 we have a big switch about Caroline's path. I'm curious what happened in your walkthrough. :)
Peek at chapter 14
Here we go with another chapter. :) It could be very short or very long, depending on your previous choices, but as you can see, it offers one of the endings of Robert's path (of course, if Carl's plans suceeded).
The Parity 0.53
Chapters 0-13. Enjoy. :)
The update tomorrow :)
Hello everybody. :) I'm officially coming back to live and create. Those 6 months were really rough, but May was calm enough to bring Parity back to life. ;)
The new times...
Hey! First of all, I want to apologize for the lack of an update. Covid hit me, and I needed much time for the recovery. On the other hand, February was quite busy because of the situation in Eastern Europe. For now, I withdrew my resignation from my work. I got the promotion and a new goal - I'll coordinate actions that will help Ukrainians in Poland. I speak Ukrainian and Russian, and I haven't imagined that I would use those languages in such terms.I still work on The Parity, but it&#...
I caught covid...
So, I caught covid. :/ I feel quite well (the vaccination in October hit me more). I try to write, but I'm not the most effective with that. :(
Wow, what a year
Sorry for the silence and the lack of release. If some of my December's patrons don't support me anymore, please, send me PM, I'll send you new chapter as I finish it.My parents-in-law in late December, and my wife now caught covid. It's nothing alarming, but energy- and time-draining for me. :)I hope nothing unexpected happens and I'll give you a release soon. :)Happy New Year!
About the competent NPCs
One of my goals during writing "The Parity" was to make competent NPCs. Pauline of course is the main character, and I think that you feel that many of your decisions influence the story directly. But some of your choices shape the story in another way. Here I give you a scene that fulfills one of those situations. Martha has a plan, but you can through your walkthrough make her change her decision.***Martha was odd and distant that day. It was quite weird to see her in that condition. T...
Should we have Discord?
Belgaesh proposed that The Parity should have a Discord channel. I was thinking about it some time ago, but as I use Discord only for playing tabletop RPG, I have a small experience how such channel should look like. And however my wife surprised me with the plenty of inspirations (well, she's a better gamer than me, that's for sure), I follow Belgaesh's advice and I ask you about it. :) Do you think we should have our own space at Discord?
Another scene that most of you would probably miss
Another scene that most of you would probably missBreaking news! Pauline is changing back to a boy in this chapter!!!!At least, for a while. ;) It's not really a spoiler, she was temporarily changing back twice during the story. And as a boy, she can have a little chat with Justin, which ends with... Well, let's say, some little addition to Justin's arc. I know that Justin isn't the most popular character in the cast, but still, he's important for the plot. So, a little scene...
Peek at chapter 13
Chapter 13 will be huge and important. Probably I'll cut some passages, but I think it will be the longest single chapter to write so far (however, I'm afraid that chapter 15 will be long that I will have to divide it). Everything is in motion, so I'm excited to see the results of the future polls, how you have handled all the challenges. ;)
A little scene from chapter 13
Chapters 13-14 will focus on the attempts of Caroline to change back. There are generally two routes - the first is against Robert, and the second one is against David. There's a little scene that will happen if Pauline doesn't join the humiliating of Robert. ***Robert was a total mess. Since Olivier had replaced him in the team, he became almost invisible. Just a miserable shadow of a jock he was just one month ago.It was a warm day. You sat on the bench during the break. When he was co...
Chekhov's gun in The Parity
We have 10 chapters to the end, so it's about 200k-250k words+the epilogues. The resolving of the paths is more challenging than their introductions. I try to note every element that should be explained in the story, due to Chekhov's guidance that the riffle on the wall must be shot, or the audience would be disappointed.Of course, it's not that you have the chance to get all information in a single walkthrough, but I think I need to describe:- the Neighbours (the creatures from the ...
Who was on the trip with Pauline?
The trip is more important than you think. ;) It's a time of summary of your relations during the game. People there will be a rescue team if things from chapter 14 would get dark.Olivier, Alina, and Justin are a basic set.
The Parity 0.42a
Problem with a nasty comments fixed, thanks to Kingpin192. Please, make saves with the passages with some bugs - it would be easier for me to fix them. I have three various paths to test, but it still doesn't cover the all of the possibilities.
The Parity 0.42
Newest release. :) Chapters 0-12.
The scene that most of you probably miss
I still work on chapter 12. I hoped that November and December would be enough loose for me to write 3 chapters, just to catch the delay up. Unfortunately, my work keeps me busy, and frustrated me. I plan to buy a computer good enough to work on the graphics and more serious game development, so maybe I could quit my job, and focus on the games. With this rapid growth of inflation in Poland, your support is already 50% of my salary, so maybe after I'll start a second project which would be m...
Advantages - the future addition to the mechanics
I keep thinking about the way to implement everyday life into the mechanics that I created for "The Parity". And as I'm really satisfied with the basics of these mechanics, I think I need something else to cover the advantages and everyday life - something that could change and needs the attention of the player, but it changes slowly.I want a system that could cover school life, special relations, and unique, yet demanding skills. And as my game and my future projects would be basica...
Peek at chapter 12 (well, part of it)
I've started to work on chapter 12, so you can see the general idea. However, as there will be 4-7 people on the trip, my usual structure based on the passages seem to be less useful as general. I have a couple of ideas on how to manage the content, but I will decide during the writing.I wanted at least one chapter that would be a little lighter and looser than usual. Many of situations I will present happened in the real-life, so I think I will dedicate this chapter to all girls I knew that...
A short dialogue from upcoming chapter
A little scene from upcoming chapter 12. It will be generally a little lighter than the previous ones, as I want to show some teenage life, and the relations (and the everyday struggle of Pauline, and how she adjusts to being a girl). But as the finale of the story will be political, there will be some news about the situation in Poland, so the characters will talk about LGBT+ community. Let's say that if you invite Martha for your trip, Olivier will undermine her engagement. And yet, you...
About the mechanics of the choices
I've shared my experiences with the mechanics of choices in the Parity on some forums. Maybe you will find it interesting. :)***I want to give my CYOA game maximum repeatability. As I am in the middle of the development (11/22 chapters), I think I can share my experience about the choices, as most of my reviewers keep praising my game for the "choices [that] matter to the point of being overwhelming" or "you actually can feel that the choices that you make".I based the core m...
The Parity 0.41
Happy Halloween! Finally, the chapter 11 is finished! And I've restored my life-work balance, and I even will have some vacation. :v And I hope that I will come back to some rhythm. :)Thank you so much for your support. :)
